OMG, this is the most wonderful and adorable thing I've ever seen EVAR! The shading is great, his hair is great, her hair is SPECTACULAR, and both their expressions are perfect for the situation, especially White's. A wonderful job, dude, and the same goes for the rest of your drawings.
I actually got an idea for a fanfiction based on this, and perhaps some of your other Chessshipping drawings. Do you mind if I write it, and maybe use this as a cover page? I promise I'll give you the credit you deserve!